Feedback from We are seventeen

Iv'e been e-mailing the company 'We are seventeen' in London, asking some advice and direction on my latest updates to my second year work (which i showed them last year at my portfolio visit.)

Now that i have developed my skills further over summer, i really wanted to send my work over to them and see how they think i have progressed since my portfolio visit. Plus their thoughts and opinions on anything i could improve or introduce to my compositions.

These are the screen shots (that i will keep you up to date with) of the conversation between me and George from We are seventeen.

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